... describing people/ action, you may use vivid description one emotion, mannerisms, etc to suggest a particular mood e.g stunned(Chan nan), she sat down shakily and buried her face in her hands (stunt= ... description is important when beginning story • To describe setting, you may use details involving the tenses suggest a particular atmosphere e.g lapping waves, soft sand = peaceful scene • When ... strike) V/ Use descriptive vocabulary • Avoid using simplistic adj or verbs (e.g good, bad, nice, well, etc) as these words will make your composition • Use a variety of descriptive verbs (e.g...