Mẫu đoạn văn hỗ trợ thi đại học môn tiếng anh THPT Quốc Gia có viết luận 2016 Chào bạn, năm 2015 theo mẫu đề minh họa BGD em 12 phải thi viết phần viết đoạn paragraph chiếm 1,5 điểm Các bạn phân tích kĩ đề minh họa BDG thấy viết đoạn văn (paragraph) viết văn (essay) Là viết paragraph viết essay theo số trường THPT số tài liệu gần hướng dẫn Độ dài paragraph khoảng 150 từ Và lưu ý viết paragraph khơng xuống dịng, khơng tách làm phần viết essay, paragraph “đoạn văn” mà Vẫn có câu dẫn đề, 3-4 câu thân bài, câu kết Bố cục phải mạch lạc, sử dụng từ nối Dưới số từ nối số đoạn văn mẫu, đoạn văn (paragraph) văn (essay) bạn 1) cho ví dụ -For example, -For instance, - .such as 2) nêu ý kiến -In my opinion, (đã in my opinion ko dùng I think nữa) - Personally, -From my point of view, - From my perspective, It seems to me that 3) đưa ý kiến đối lập -However, =Nevertheless = Nonetheless -Although 4) Thêm vào ý -Moreover, -Furthermore, - Additionally = In additional, - Besides, -Also, -What's more, 5)đưa kết wa - As a result, - Therefore, - Thus, - .so - Consequently, 6) Liệt kê thứ tự -First / Firstly, -Second / Secondly, - Third / Thirdly, - Final / Finally, 7) In other words : nói cách khác Specifically, Nói cách cụ thể 8) kết luận: - In short, - In summary, - In conclusion, -To conclude, - To summarize, WRITING In about 140 words, write about possible measures that should be taken to protect our natural environment Nowadays, some species are in danger of extinction and I think we should join hands to protect them Firstly, I think we shouldn't use herbicides and pesticides because they are in fact hazardous pollutants that have bad effects on wildlife Some animals can be harmed if they eat these pollutants Secondly, I suppose the government should introduce laws to prohibit the killing of endangered animals and the destruction of the environment where the endangered species live Thirdly, we should tell our friends, relatives or families not to purchase products made from body parts of endangered species We should avoid supporting the market in illegal wildlife including: tortoise shell, ivory, coral, ect Finally, we should protect wildlife habitat because the greatest threat that faces many species is the widespread destruction of habitat All in all, endangered species should be protected so that the Earth will be a happy planet for us to live on In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the person who has great influence on your life The person who has great influence on my life is my mother She is 42 years old She is not beautiful but she is a wonderful woman after all My mother has an oval face with big black eyes and full lips She has long black hair, a slim build and a fair complexion but the thing I admire most is her character She is always kind to all of us She never gets angry with anyone She is a simple person so she does not like wearing expensive clothes or jewels Also, she is a busy woman She works from the early morning till the evening in the market to sell clothes Furthermore, she has to get up early everyday to prepare breakfast for the family I love my mother very much I will try to study hard to please her I wish she would live with me forever In about 140 words, write about the changes that information technology brings to your life Over the last two decades, information technology has been responsible for creating amazing resources which put all the information we need right at our fingertips and has dramatically changed our day-to-day lives The first change is that information technology has killed the greeting cards because we are now using an e-card or email to greet others The next change I want to mention is that teenagers now tend to use the internet to prepare an online dating with strangers they have never met yet The way of sharing information is also changed Social network like internet or Smartphone now allow us to share information anytime and anywhere Then information technology also change the way we relax These days, people often spend their free time watching TV, connecting Facebook or playing video games More importantly, the way we communicate with others is also changed a lot Smartphone and Internet have replaced the traditional chats with others All in all, information technology has been changing our lives in many ways and I think we should use it with caution In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the most memorable experience in your life The most memorable experience in my life happened three years ago but now I could recall this event very clearly On the final day of my 9-grade years at secondary school, my father gave me VND 200 for the good grades I had scored in my final exam To enjoy it, I invited some of my closest friends to a restaurant for a meal At the restaurant, I asked my friends to order as much as they liked The food was delicious and we began to eat We ate, talked and laughed at the jokes we made in school After we had finished our food, the waiter brought us the bill I opened my purse to take out the money To my surprise, I found my money missing Only then I realized that I had left the money at home I wanted to borrow the money from my friends, but they had brought only enough money for bus fare I told the waiter and he lent me his phone to call my sister and told her to bring the money to the restaurant Ever since that day I have stopped coming near that restaurant because I am afraid that some of the waiters might recognize my face In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantages of computer Computer plays an important part in our life However, while bringing certain advantages, this high-tech device has its own limitations First of all, computer is a useful tool and an intelligent device in every aspect of life What’s more, new constructive materials, new robots, and new fuels are all made with the help of information technology That is to say computer has made our life become modern, more convenient and civilized However, a computer also has its own disadvantages because the users take its advantage for negative purposes Some people use computers to nothing but playing games, chitchat, spam, create dirty information on the Net In addition, sitting in front of the screen for long hours can lead to obesity, backache, and short-sightedness Besides, people paying too much attention to online activities may become passive in real life because of their lacks of communication In short, everything has its two sides, so does computer Therefore, it is necessary that we use it for right purposes Why people learn English? Write a paragraph about 150 words English is an international language which plays an important part in many field of our society and all of us have to learn English for some reasons The first reason is that English is one of the major subjects which are taught at schools and universities If you want to get high grades and pass the exams, there is no way but learning English The second and the main reason is to get a high – paying job We all know that English is required in many jobs concerning languages As it is an international language native and second language so it is easy for you to communicate with foreigners if you know English In brief, people learn English because it is a useful tool in many important fields and one of the main keys to succeed in modern society In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the benefits of exercise Health is considered to be the most valuable thing we have and the most effective way to better one’s health is doing regular exercise One advantage of doing exercise is to reduce stress People who exercise are likely to feel more relaxed and healthier Doing regular exercise helps the body produce happy chemicals that make the exercisers reduce the worries Another benefit exercising brings us is that we will feel more energetic to overcome our daily difficulties Doing exercise also helps us reduce the possibilities of being ill, protects us from some fatal diseases as heart disease, cancers and diabetes Controlling our weight is another value Fats are burnt during our practicing exercise, which helps us to keep fit To sum up, doing exercise enables people to have good body-buildings, keep fit and brings exercisers many benefits to have a longer, healthier and happier life In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the sport that you often play in your free time after school and give some reasons why you like it My favorite sport is football and I often play it in my free time after school or on every Sunday afternoon Because it is my favorite, I can tell something special about football In America, people called it soccer but I like to call it football I liked playing football when I was ten years old and it has become my favorite since then I often play footballs with my brother after school or on every Sunday afternoon The first reason why I like playing football is that it is an easy sport to play just with a right ball Not only men but also women can play it And the second reason is to be healthy and happier Practicing sports especially football can help relax and be energetic so we will feel more healthy and cheerful The last reason is that football is an attractive sport included in the World Cup taking place every four years I dream of being a famous footballer playing in the international match someday To sum up, football is an easy and useful sport for me and all of you to take up so I like it very much In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the kind of job you would like to after you finish your education I really love teaching children and I would like to become a teacher in the future The first reason is that both my father and my mother are teachers They are my good examples of being a teacher Most of my siblings become teachers too The second reason is that I love children and I would like to teach them how to read, how to write I would like to input my knowledge into students’ mind The third reason is that teaching is a noble career which is highly respected in our society A teacher is the one who helps to produce the future masters of the country He is really regarded as a “mind engineer” In order to become a good teacher, I must have good knowledge, basic qualifications of a typical teacher such as patience, honesty, kindness and a deep love for children I will try my best to pass the National Examination to let my dream come true 10 topic: Having a successful career does not necessarily mean making a lot of money "Many people think that a successful career is a job making a lot of money but I strongly disagree with this idea First of all, In know some people who are very successful in their careers don't have a lot of money but they know what they are good at and get to show their talents in what they Besides, people having successful careers will show their passion when working It means that they have motivation to work every day What's more, a successful career also has its own true value which is very important to everyone For instance, a volunteer to finance a charity campaign is considered to have a successful career although he doesn't get a high salary To conclude, a successful career is not necessarily defined as a high-paying job but it depends on the way we think about it 11) Write about the following topic: Some universities require students to take the entrance examination with the English subject Other universities not Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer In my opinion, it is better if universities in VN require students to take the entrance examination with the English subject because E is an international language which is very useful in many fields First of all, university students are the ones who have many good opportunities to get good jobs which often enquire E knowledge E is the main language used in business, international contracts, and so on Therefore, knowing E is the key to success of many students in the future What's more, there are over 700 million people speak E as their native or second language so students have to know E to communicate with foreigners to overcome all communication barrier and get success Additionally, knowing E gives students chances to get access to knowledge like the Internet because the incredible amount of information on the Internet is in E And searching Internet is a major skill for students to enrich their knowledge To summarize, it is necessary for universities to require E as a major subject in the entrance examination due to the reasons i have mentioned 12) Write a paragraph to discuss about the idea “Should Facebook be banned?” No matter how popular Facebook is with its users worldwide, I strongly believe it should be banned The first reason to support this ban is Facebook has many negative impacts on the study of a lot of students Many pupils use Facebook in class It will distract their attention from more important things that teachers give them This is the main reason why students nowadays usually get bad grades in tests The second reason is that Facebook is very addictive Some people check Facebook all the time without working, exercising, playing sports, ect They even not talk to their friends although they are very close Consequently, they lose both health and many relations Finally, using Facebook regularly will make you inactive When you go with a group of friends, they will feel extremely exhausted as you always look at your phone to check Facebook You will be lazy of joining in activities, and the result is you will become introverted Without a doubt, Facebook should be banned, for it has more useless thing than useful thing 13) Write a paragraph to express you wish to work for an international organization, giving the reasons why you choose the organization Since I was a little girl, I have harboured the dream to work for the World Health Organization (WHO) for a number of reasons as following First, working for the World Health Organization (WHO) gives me opportunities to live abroad, to use English at work, and to have high salary I am an active and dynamic person so I think it will be an interesting life to have chance to travel far and wide to meet different people of different personalities and nationalities Second, I will be able to further my biology knowledge by doing numerous medical researchers I can also understand more about life mechanism, the reactions of the bodies to the changes of the surroundings Working for the World Health Organization (WHO) will offer me occasions to meet, to have talks with well-known people worldwide To conclude, working as an official of the World Health Organization (WHO) helps me to be more aware of the value of life so I will try my best to have my dream come true some day in the future 14) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the advantages of using public transportation As we see, The public transportation brings us a number of benefits in term of individual as well as society First of all, That many people travel by public vehicles helps reduce the environment pollution That's because the amount of fuel ( which turns into exhaust after that) used to carry the number of people in a bus is less than that of many individual vehicles Moreover, Traffic jam will no longer be our long- lasting obsession if most everybody chooses public vehicles as daily means of transportation Congestion only turns up when so many people's own cars, motorbikes spread out every corner of streets Last but not least, We can save money by using buses to travel or electric trains to commute The tickets of public transportation are often cheap because it serves the big number of customers As these above advantages of public transportation, I strongly suggest that we should use public transportation as main means of transportation 15) Do you agree with the idea that marriage should be based on love or not and why? (write a paragraph about 140 words) Nowadays, almost all of people experience love and then reach marriage However, I partly agree with the idea that marriage should be based on love because only love is not enough Here the following reasons are First, there is no denial that love makes people happy in life and helps them overcome severe difficulties and build a warm family It is love that joins a man and a woman together When these above supposed things become true, I call it true love, in other words, forgiveness and sacrifice contribute to true love Moreover, future home’s finance also affects the family happiness For example, your child can’t study at school without money, you even have no wonderful moment when both of wife and husband "s inconsistency related to money turns up and so on In conclusion, marriage should be built on love and serious attitude of two sides who accept specific characters each other and fulfill the gap’s spouses 16) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about your hobby Of all the interesting free time activities as well as entertainments; I like reading book most because it brings to me many good aspects First and foremost, reading book not only helps widen my knowledge but also makes me love my life more As you know reference books provide us with a lot of information of every field of our life Besides, novels, stories which contain many romantic and touching plots controlling my feeling a great deal I often feel relaxed and love my life after read a romantic story book Moreover, enjoying books regularly gives me a good habit as I am more and more patient Especially, my ability to express words fluently is better and better Therefore, I will be confident of communicating with others In short, reading books is my main hobby and I will make best use of its advantages to have a happy lifestyle 17) In about 140 words, write a paragraph about the kind of book you like best I am usually in habit of reading books Addition to books that offer me much useful information, I also like comic book I am in fond of it for some following reasons To begin with, Comic books bring me a great deal of relaxation One of them is Doremon story, which tells many funny short stories about main characters, Doremon and Nobita, Who are close friends The author of that comic creates so many amusing situations among characters that I can’t help laughing It’s actually a hard-to-put-down book It attracts not only children but also adults as me Another good point of it I want to mention about is creative imagination I mean children need to have imaginative mindset, which helps them be more active in life By and large, comic book is worth reading after hard work It is nice for everyone 18) Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Write a paragraph about 140 to express your idea While living away from home in an apartment for a flat to study at a university, you have to learn how to be a good roommate to live with other students Firstly, you should know how to respect people and your roommates, respect their religions and cultures Do not laugh at ethnic people or racism Besides, you have to respect your roommates' privacy because everyone has rights to have their secrets So, you mustn’t read your mates’ messages or letters if you aren’t permitted In addition, you should take your duty and responsibility In general, you should help to cleaning, put litter bags to dust heap, put things back after you used Furthermore, you should try to share your ideas, experience of study and life, your happiness etc And you listen to your mates experience as well All in all, as long as you enjoy your dormitory life, get well with your friends, and then you should be a good roommate Whatever what you experiences, those of them will be a beautiful memorial of your rest of life 19) Write a paragraph to introduce a beauty spot in Viet Nam Coming to Vietnam, foreign visitors can’t forget the ancient town of Hoi An, 30 km south of Da Nang, lying on the banks of the Thu Bon River Occupied by early western traders, Hoi An was one of the major trading centers of Southeast Asia in the 16th century Hoi An has a distinct Chinese atmosphere with low, tileroofed houses and narrow streets; the original structure of some of these streets still remains almost intact All the houses were made of rare wood, decorated with lacquered boards and panels engraved with Chinese characters Pillars were also carved with ornamental designs There is no shortage of bacon in town, but cao lầu is the dish that one simply cannot miss Prices and service are rightfully on par with the latest venues in major cities like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh People are very friendly in Hoi An Over the last few years, Hoi An has become a very popular tourist destination in Vietnam 20) Students should take a part- time job Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Write a paragraph to justify your answer Part time job is the best way to absorb knowledge, learn experience for one’s career and earn his living Therefore, I strongly agree with the idea that students should take a part-time job First of all, students taking a part-time job can get more experience for their future jobs For example, pedagogic students take part time jobs as tutors can have chances to practice to be teachers in the future In addition, when doing a part-time job, students can practice the lessons they got from classes For instance, taking a job requiring a good demand of English can improve your English because you can practice English with foreigners Finally, when doing part-time jobs, students can earn money on their own so they can grow up Those who not have to work hard hardly know its value To sum up, I think doing a part-time job does students good for the reasons I have mentioned They can get more experience for future job, practice the lessons they got from classes and grow up 21) Write a paragraph about which is your ideal world you'd like to live in 2050 ( about 140 words) According to the incredible development of our society, I predict that in 2050, We will witness the positive changes of economic, peace, education and technology First of all, I hope good finance status of all countries around the world will be constantly stable and crises will no longer exist Besides, terrorism, war will disappear forever, which is a big happiness of all people all over the world Moreover, When economic is in the heyday, education should be open and free to everyone in order that both the rich and the poor can be provided with professional knowledge to lead a promising life I also image robots can replace workers with hardship in dangerous construction sites to reduce the increasing number of labor accidents nowadays All in all, there is no doubt that no one can deny the wonderful world like that, all of us wish for that real dream ! 22) In about 150 words, write a paragraph to discuss about the difficulties that women encounter in modern society Women in modern society are still limited in some roles and encounter many problems that we should join hands to solve First of all, many people in the past believed that women's natural roles were as mothers and wives and this thought still remains these days These people considered women to be better suited for childbearing and homemaking rather than for involvement in the public life of business or politics Besides, women nowadays still have to housework, take care of their children, fulfill their social tasks and also get their career achievements It’s very unequal and quite hard for them to complete these tasks at the sometime Furthermore, women, especially in third world nations, have to suffer from domestic violence, gender discrimination in work places Women are an integral part of our world, as it is said that “men build the house and women make it home” Therefore, let get started to protect them 23) Do you agree with the idea that married women shouldn’t go to work? Should women be housewives or career women? In my opinion, married working women should be encouraged to leave their jobs to be full-time housewives The first benefit of being full-time mothers is that their children will be well taken care of Working mothers will find it hard to both work outside and look after their children and families Having chances to raise their children to masters is the second main reason why married women shouldn’t go to work When women aren’t under a lot of working pressure, they will spend time staying with her children to teach them the bad and the good Their children will feel comfortable and not lonely The third reason of mine is that the risk of both parents dying and leaving children orphaned is reduced Today there are many accidents outside so I think one of parents should stay at home to be safe if bad things happen In general, I strongly believe that men should go out to bring money and caring the whole family is women’s responsibility 24) Describe your ideal house I often dream of a modern and comfortable house by the sea There will be a garden in front of the house with a lot of beautiful flowers To the right of the garden, I will have a garage built to park my car To the left of the garden, there will be a fresh well for my family to get water There will be twelve rooms in my house: five bedrooms, two living rooms, one study, two bathrooms, one dining room and one kitchen The front windows will look to the sea and the back windows will look to the mountains In the living room, there will be a fireplace to keep warm in the winter In my study, there will be a computer for me to surf the Internet In my bedroom, there will be a cable TV and a hi-fi stereo I will also have a robot to the cleaning and the cooking This is my ideal house and I hope I will have it in the future CẤU TRÚC VIẾT LẠI CÂU -Mr.Idea1 S + be + adj + N = S + V + adv S + V + adv = S + V + with + N S + remember + to Sth = S + don’t forget + to Sth S + be + adj = What + a + adj + N! S + V + adv = How + adj + S + be S + V + adv = How + adv + S + V! S + be + ing-adj = S + be +ed-adj S + V = S + be + ed-adj S + V + Khoảng thời gian = It + take + (sb) + Khoảng thời gian + to + V 10 S + be + too + adj + to + V = S + be + so + adj + that + S + can’t + V 11 S + V + too + adv + to + V = S + V + so + adv + that + S + can’t + V 12 S + be + so + adj + that + S + V = S + be + not + adj + enough + to + V 13 S + be + too + adj + to + V = S + be + not + adj + enough + to + V 14 S + V + so + adv + that + S + V = S + do/does/did + not + V + adv + enough + to + V 15 Because + clause = Because of + noun/gerund 16 Although + clause = In spite of + Nound/gerund 17 Although + clause = Despite + Nound/gerund 18 S + V + N = S + be + adj 19 S + be + adj = S + V + O 20 S + be accustomed to + Ving = S + be used to +Ving /N 21 S + often + V = S + be used to +Ving /N 22 This is the first time + S + have + PII = S+be + not used to + Ving/N 23 S + would prefer = S + would rather S + Past subjunctive (lối cầu khẩn) 24 S + like better than = S + would than 25 S + prefer = S + would rather + V 26 S + V + O = S + find + it (unreal objective) + adj + to + V 27 It’s one’s duty to sth = S + be + supposed to sth 28 S + be + PII + to + V = S + be + supposed to sth 29 Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + be + PII 30 Imperative verb (mệnh lệnh) = S + should (not) + sth ... environment Nowadays, some species are in danger of extinction and I think we should join hands to protect them Firstly, I think we shouldn''t use herbicides and pesticides because they are in... necessarily mean making a lot of money "Many people think that a successful career is a job making a lot of money but I strongly disagree with this idea First of all, In know some people who are... to support this ban is Facebook has many negative impacts on the study of a lot of students Many pupils use Facebook in class It will distract their attention from more important things that