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Overall ~6 5 Task response 7 0 Đã trả lời đầy đủ và phát triển đủ các ý đề bài yêu cầu Kết luật hơp lý, thống nhất với body Nhưng ở phần kết luận vẫn cần phải nhắc lại ý kiến của bản thân (dùng các từ.
Overall: ~6.5 - Task response: 7.0 o Đã trả lời đầy đủ phát triển đủ ý đề yêu cầu o Kết luật hơp lý, thống với body Nhưng phần kết luận cần phải nhắc lại ý kiến thân (dùng từ personaly I believe, etc…) o Đưa luận hợp lý liên quan - Coherence & Cohesion: 6.0 o Sắp xếp đoạn hợp lý, rõ ràng, có phát triển ý tốt, dùng từ nối tốt o Chú ý, từ mở đầu đoạn phải tương thích (Ví dụ, đoạn dùng Firstly đoạn phải Secondly; đoạn On the one hand đoạn On the other hand) - Lexical Resources: 6.5 o Vốn từ tốt, có nhiều từ nâng cao Cố gắng áp dụng từ học vào để tra từ điển tìm trợ giúp o Có lỗi tả - Grammatical range and accuracy: 6.0 o Sử dụng tốt kết hợp câu đơn câu phức o Đoạn kết sử dụng cấu trúc “Both sth1 and sth2 are….” sáng nghĩa Writing: Government investment in arts, such as music and theatre is a waste of money Government should invest this money in public services instead To what extent you agree with this statement? Answer Many people believe There are many opinions that the government should invest in public services rather than wasting of national budgets on investments in art such as music and theater I personally not fullypartly agree with this view for the reasons discussed below On the one hand, I agree that governments should spend most of their national budgets on developing public services Especially for poor or developing countries, the government's attention should be placed on infrastructure, facilities as well as health care services and education systems, which factors are important to promote the success of a nation For example, in poor countries in Africa, it is undeniable that people here need medical and educational services rather than entertainment services On the other handHowever, I believe that enjoying art is one of the essential needs in today's modern human life In fact, the standard of living is constantly increasing, and many people demand to see music and theatre as a entertainment, which gives them great joy Therefore, the government should also consider investing in art services, which not only satisfy the entertainment needs of the people but also helps to disseminate national cultural values through music, movies or paintings For instance, Vietnam is still a developing country, but the Vietnamese people are always proud of the traditional arts recognized by UNESCO such as Quan Ho folk songs, Ca trù , this is because it is Tthe Vietnamese government has always invested properly in preserving cultural and artistic heritage In short, I hold a strong belief that both investing in public services and, or investing in art areis essential and haves certain advantagesbenefits, so the governments of each country should consider using distributing the budget for both aforementioned sectors the above investments a reasonable way