... words instead of the advised 25 0-2 65). It has a sound structure, your position is clearly expressed, the information is well-organized, and structure-wise the sentences are fine. ... Mummy’.Admittedly, profit - driven globalization has severely affected young people. Today, in the metropolises in different countries, it is very common to see teenagers wearing NIKE T-shirts and Adidas ... too long (309 words instead of advised 25 0-2 65). Otherwise this work is a very good one; it covers the task, your position is clear, the ideas are well-organized, expressed, explained and supported....