BY NGOC BACH DẠNG PART QUESTION • Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development ? • What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family ? Hướng giải: + Chú ý đề thuộc dạng câu đầu giới thiệu topic sau đưa câu hỏi (2 câu hỏi Có thể hỏi giống kiểu problems & solutions hỏi trên) + Đối với dạng này, viết chia thành đoạn ý đoạn thân bạn nên viết cách cân BY NGOC BACH DÀN BÀI • Introduction + Giới thiệu topic (paraphrase lại câu đề bài) + Trả lời câu hỏi nêu đề Chỉ cần trả lời chung chung không cần nêu chi tiết, cụ thể • Thân 1: Trả lời chi tiết câu hỏi • Thân 2: Trả lời chi tiết câu hỏi • Conclusion Nhắc lại ý nêu câu phần mở BY NGOC BACH VÍ DỤ TOPIC Đề thi 21/05/2015 Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life QUESTION What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life? BY NGOC BACH DÀN BÀI Mở bài: + Viết lại câu đề cách paraphrase từ khóa + Trả lời câu hỏi đề Đề nêu câu hỏi: “Nguyên nhân tượng ?” “Hệ lên xã hội sống gia đình ? Thân 1: Trả lời câu hỏi thứ nhất: Nêu nguyên nhân nhiều người định sinh muộn + many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority + delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their lives Thân 2: Trả lời câu hỏi thứ hai: Nêu ảnh hưởng lên xã hội sống gia đình + raising children could be a huge challenge for older parents + getting pregnant after 35 years of age oftentimes carries more potential health risk -> the quality of the future workforce Kết luận: nhắc lại ý nêu câu thứ phần mở BY NGOC BACH MỞ BÀI CÂU CHỦ ĐỀ CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life CÂU VIẾT LẠI: In recent years, the decision of parents to start a family later in life has become an increasingly popular trend MỞ BÀI PHẦN CÂU HỎI CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life? CÂU THỨ PHẦN MỞ BÀI : There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on both family life and on the community as a whole MỞ BÀI ĐỀ BÀI: Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life? MỞ BÀI: In recent years, the decision of parents to start a family later in life has become an increasingly popular trend There are a number of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant impact on both family life and on the community as a whole Thân 1: Trả lời câu hỏi thứ nhất: Nêu nguyên nhân nhiều người định sinh muộn + many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority + delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their lives There are two important reasons why more people nowadays are deciding against having children when they are young.Firstly, rather than embarking on parenthood, many individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority If they had to split their time between working and bringing up their offspring when they were in the early stages of their careers, their performance at work and promotion prospects could be negatively affected Secondly, delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their lives For example, this choice may let young couples have a richer social life, pursue their interests and hobbies or even to travel the world BY NGOC BACH Thân 2: Trả lời câu hỏi thứ hai: Nêu ảnh hưởng lên xã hội sống gia đình + raising children could be a huge challenge for older parents +getting pregnant after 35 years of age oftentimes carries more potential health risk -> the quality of the future workforce However, this tendency could have negative consequences in terms of both family life and society An important concern for a family is that raising children could be a huge challenge for older parents Even though they might have a high socioeconomic status, as well as great experience and knowledge, it may not be easy for them to communicate with and relate to their children, due to the generation gap.Another negative factor is that getting pregnant after 35 years of age oftentimes carries more potential health risks Specifically, this could increase the danger of having a miscarriage or stillbirth for older mothers, and babies might be at greater risk of having Down‟s syndrome Consequently, this could negatively affect the quality of the future workforce BY NGOC BACH INTRODUCTION CÂU CHỦ ĐỀ CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration CÂU VIẾT LẠI: It is true that some job seekers select their career based on salary level INTRODUCTION PHẦN CÂU HỎI CỦA ĐỀ BÀI: To what extent you agree or disagree? CÂU THỨ PHẦN INTRODUCTION : While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone INTRODUCTION When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration To what extent you agree or disagree? It is true that some job seekers select their career based on salary level While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone Body 1: discuss why a high salary is important when choosing a job + having a good standard of living + motivation On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people should choose a high-paying job One reason is that a wage plays an integral part in guaranteeing an acceptable standard of living Being offered a high salary allows employees to meet their basic needs, buy a comfortable house and perhaps even go on luxury holidays Furthermore, one of the best motivations is a competitive salary For example, the head of a company may offer a pay rise to a new employee who is able to achieve a sales target during the year This rewarding perk will encourage the new sales staff to try hard and enhance the level of job performance BY NGOC BACH Body 2: two other factors which you consider to be extremely important + job satisfaction + the contribution that the work may make towards society On the other hand, job seekers have different reasons apart from salary to choose a job Firstly, job satisfaction is extremely important when people choose their career If a person adores the outdoor life, he will not be happy being a stockbroker or a financier, no matter that the salaries for both jobs are extremely high Secondly, contributing to the community is another reason to consider a job This could bring about a much more civilized society For instance, Mr Kurt a Danishman, who has lived in Vietnam for about 20 years, has constructed schools and other facilities for disabled children instead of working for the Danish Embassy BY NGOC BACH INTRODUCTION: It is true that some job seekers select their career based on salary level While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone CONCLUSION: In conclusion, it is certainly true that money can be an important factor for many people when choosing prospective employment, but this is by no means the key consideration for everybody in making a career decision When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration To what extent you agree or disagree? It is true that some job seekers select their career based on salary level While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people should choose a high-paying job One reason is that a wage plays an integral part in guaranteeing an acceptable standard of living Being offered a high salary allows employees to meet their basic needs, buy a comfortable house and perhaps even go on luxury holidays Furthermore, one of the best motivations is a competitive salary For example, the head of a company may offer a pay rise to a new employee who is able to achieve a sales target during the year This rewarding perk will encourage the new sales staff to try hard and enhance the level of job performance On the other hand, job seekers have different reasons apart from salary to choose a job Firstly, job satisfaction is extremely important when people choose their career If a person adores the outdoor life, he will not be happy being a stockbroker or a financier, no matter that the salaries for both jobs are extremely high Secondly, contributing to the community is another reason to consider a job This could bring about a much more civilized society For instance, Mr Kurt a Danishman, who has lived in Vietnam for about 20 years, has constructed schools and other facilities for disabled children instead of working for the Danish Embassy In conclusion, it is certainly true that money can be an important factor for many people when choosing prospective employment, but this is by no means the key consideration for everybody in making a career decision 297 words Written by Ngoc Bach BY NGOC BACH IELTS EXAMINER COMMENTS + Task response: This was an excellent essay All the good techniques of task response are here: the task asked for your opinion and you stated this consistently in the introduction and throughout the essay + Coherence and cohesion The examiner is looking for evidence of good planning and organisation of your ideas and you provided lots of evidence You did not try to discuss too many ideas, and this allowed you to discuss each one fully and to use examples Your paragraph structure was logical and your topic sentences indicated the central idea in each paragraph Finally, you linked sentences using appropriate and varied expressions, including Firstly/Secondly in paragraph I noted your intelligent use of This as one of the effective linking techniques in this essay + Lexical resource: there was certainly a sufficient range of vocabulary, accurately used, to express all your ideas clearly + Grammar: The range of grammar should certainly satisfy the examiner I found examples of a (first) conditional sentence, a (zero) conditional sentence, relative and adverb clauses and a range of verb tenses I was also pleased to notice a variety of sentence structures TEMPLATE Đối với quan điểm : “Đồng ý (không đồng ý) phần” 1.Mở bài: + Paraphrase câu đề + While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that … /While I disagree with the idea of… , I believe that… 2.Thân 1: On the one hand,… 3.Thân 2: On the other hand, 4.Kết luận In conclusion,it is certainly true that…., but this is by no means … BY NGOC BACH TEMPLATE Đối với quan điêm : “Hồn tồn đồng ý (khơng đồng ý)” 1.Mở bài: + Paraphrase câu đề + I not agree with the idea of …/I not agree that …/I completely disagree/agree with this idea 2.Thân 1: There are some reasons/a variety of reasons why… 3.Thân 2: Apart from the practical benefits/disadvantages expressed above, I believe that 4.Kết luận In conclusion, I believe that BY NGOC BACH LƯU Ý + Xem file “Hướng dẫn ôn tập_Opinion” + Download file “Vocabulary_Opinion” BY NGOC BACH Hope you guys like my lesson ^^ - Ngoc Bach BY NGOC BACH WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY Đây viết mà bạn thấy video mình: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration To what extent you agree or disagree? It is true that some job seekers select their career based on salary level While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others base their job choice on more important considerations rather than salary alone On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people should choose a high-paying job One reason is that a wage plays an integral part in guaranteeing an acceptable standard of living Being offered a high salary allows employees to meet their basic needs, buy a comfortable house and perhaps even go on luxury holidays Furthermore, one of the best motivations is a competitive salary For example, the head of a company may offer a pay rise to a new employee who is able to achieve a sales target during the year This rewarding perk will encourage the new sales staff to try hard and enhance the level of job performance On the other hand, job seekers have different reasons apart from salary to choose a job Firstly, job satisfaction is extremely important when people choose their career If a person adores the outdoor life, he will not be happy being a stockbroker or a financier, no matter that the salaries for both jobs are extremely high Secondly, contributing to the community is another reason to consider a job This could bring about a much more civilized society For instance, Mr Kurt a Danishman, who has lived in Vietnam for about 20 years, has constructed schools and other facilities for disabled children instead of working for the Danish Embassy In conclusion, it is certainly true that money can be an important factor for many people when choosing prospective employment, but this is by no means the key consideration for everybody in making a career decision (Band 8.0+) 297 words Written by Ngoc Bach Các bạn lần phân tích kỹ lại essay trả lời câu hỏi sau: Đếm số câu sử dụng đoạn: Bao nhiêu câu cho mở ? Bao nhiêu câu cho thân ? kết luận ? Bạn thấy sử dụng phương pháp cho tất viết IELTS Writing task Đây ý -> mục đích để người dễ học, dễ bắt theo Để ý vào câu phần mở bài, câu topic sentence (câu đầu tiên) khổ thân câu kết luận Bạn thấy câu liên kết với ? Gạch chân cụm từ tốt (good vocabulary) essay Written by Ngoc Bach Website: www.ngocbach.com Page Answers: Tất IELTS Writing task sử dụng phương pháp: câu cho phần mở bài, 5~6 câu cho khổ thân bài, câu kết luận Câu phần mở bài, câu trả lời gồm ý : Một mặt, tin lương yếu tố quan trọng chọn công việc với nhiều người, mặt khác tin người khác có lựa chọn khác bên cạnh lương Hai khổ thân nhằm hỗ trợ cho ý nêu câu mở Khổ cho ý :"lương yếu tố quan trọng chọn công việc với nhiều người" Khổ cho ý: "người khác có lựa chọn khác bên cạnh lương" Kết luận nhắc lại ý nêu câu phần mở Do vậy, viết từ mở bài, thân bài, kết luận ý liên kết với chặt chẽ Các cụm từ tốt bài: (Nội dung phần giáo viên xứ đọc file mp3 "VOCABULARY")  to suit somebody = to be useful or convenient for somebody The idea here is that a job with a high salary is the most important factor for many people : thích hợp cho người  to play an integral part in = to be an essential part of something So, here, a wage is an essential part in achieving a good standard of living: đóng vai trị khơng thể thiếu  a pay rise = the popular term used for an increase in salary : tăng lương  a perk = something that you receive in addition to your normal salary as an incentive or reward : phúc lợi phụ  a stockbroker = a person who buys and sells shares in companies for other people: nhà mơi giới chứng khốn  a financier = a person who lends large amounts of money to businesses: chuyên gia tài  a civilized society = a society that has laws and customs that are fair and morally acceptable: xã hội văn minh  disabled children = children who are unable to use part of their body completely or easily because of an injury, an illness or some other physical or mental condition: trẻ tàn tật  prospective employment = employment which is expected to be undertaken soon: việc làm tương lai Written by Ngoc Bach Website: www.ngocbach.com Page PHƯƠNG PHÁP HỌC TỪ VỰNG Lưu ý chìa khóa để đạt điểm cao IELTS Writing "Vocabulary" Tất giám khảo IELTS biết khẳng định "vocabulary is the key to language learning, and it's the key to a good IELTS score The more words and phrases you know, the better you'll in the test" (ielts-simon.com) Do vậy, hợp tác vị giám khảo IELTS Anh (do thầy Simon trang ielts-simon.com giới thiệu) giáo viên IELTS xứ Mỹ biên soạn thu âm -> giúp người học từ dễ dàng Khơng giúp người nâng điểm IELTS Writing, cịn giúp nâng trình tiếng Anh nói chung người Cách học sau: + Bước 1: Các bạn đọc nghiên cứu kỹ transcript (mục từ vựng phía trên) Khi học, người nên đọc kỹ phần giải thích tiếng anh để hiểu rõ nghĩa từ Phần tiếng việt để tham khảo nhiều cụm đơi khó thể dịch sát nghĩa hoàn toàn, dịch đại ý để người hiểu Khi đọc cố tưởng tượng ngữ cảnh sử dụng viết + Bước 2: Copy file mp3 "VOCABULARY" vào điện thoại, nghe nghe lại nhiều tốt (ít 100 lần cho file mp3), vừa nghe vừa lặp lại giọng đọc người xứ + Bước 3: Tự đặt câu ví dụ riêng cố gắng áp dụng vào viết, nói bạn Làm theo bước vậy, người hiểu sử dụng thành thạo cụm từ trên, biến chúng thực thành Điều khơng tốt cho trình IELTS Writing người mà giúp cải thiện đáng kể khả nghe, nói tiếng Anh nói chung người Chúc người học tốt ! -Ngọc Bách- Written by Ngoc Bach Website: www.ngocbach.com Page