Bài mẫu band 8.0 đề thi ngày 30/1/2016 Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education Do you agree or disagree? Bài mẫu band 8.0 Despite the popularity of prison sentences as the way to control illegalities(1), improvements on education have gained social endorsement(2) as a means to eliminate the problem from its root(3) In my opinion, I disagree that education is the better one as it is rather impossible to compare these two methods’ effectiveness owing to their distinct impacts On the one hand, the reasons why prisons are of indispensable necessity(4) for social security(5) are varied They are the place to keep people who have broken the law contained, ensuring the safety of other citizens Especially, dangerous criminals such as murderers or rapists have to be imprisoned(6) for their heinous actions(7) Furthermore, severe prison sentences act as adeterrent against(8) crimes Knowing there might be a chance of getting caught and condemned to jail(9), which also means losing freedom and living a miserable life in a cell, ones who are having the intention of committing illegalities would reconsider going down the path On the other hand, education serves as a remedy for the origin of crimes(10) Education contributes greatly to heighten people’s intellect(11) and to form a civilized society(12) With access to better educational services, citizens would be well-informed about the damage that committing crimes would cause to their community and themselves, which eventually leads to the decline in crime rates Additionally, the possession of certain qualifications through fundamental education like vocational training(13) could secure a person’s stable life, which would dispel any ideas of committing crimes(14) In conclusion, I believe there is no absolute way to deduce whether imprisonment policies or better education would take the dominant role in dealing with crimes as they both tackle the problem just in different ways ZIM ACADEMY Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi http://zim.vn