Chapter II: Phrases: Prime-Time Players \ki Confusing: Do you know my friend Bill? Is Bill the friend or is the speaker talking to Bill? Clear: Do you know my friend, Bill? Appositive Phrases Appositive phrases are nouns or pronouns with modifiers. Appositive phrases provide additional information and description to the sentence. As with solitary appositives, appositive phrases are placed near the noun or pronoun they describe. For example: • Columbia University, the second-largest landowner in New York City {after the Catholic Church), is part of the Ivy League. • David Prowse, the guy in the Darth Vader suit in the Star Wars movies, did not find out that his lines were going to be dubbed over by James Earl Jones until he saw the screening of the movie. Appositives are great stylistic devices because they allow you to eliminate unnecessary words and put more information in one sentence. They can also help you • Create more graceful sentences. • Eliminate repetition. • Create a beat or rhythm in your writing. • Make your writing more interesting. Here's an example: Two sentences: Phineas T. Barnum was a great American showman. Barnum was near death in 1891 when a New York newspaper asked if he'd like to have his obituary published while he could still read it. One sentence: Phineas T. Barnum, a great American showman, was near death in 1891 when a New York newspaper asked if he'd like to have his obituary published while he could still read it. You Could Look It Up _ Appositive phrases are nouns or pronouns with modifiers. In grammar lingo, nonessential appositives are called "nonrestric- tive." More on this and other stylistic devices in Part 5. IMt Part 3: Usage and Abusaqe appositives with commas. The Moment of Truth As with appositives, appositive phrases come in two varieties: essential and nonessen- tial. Don't set off essential appositives with commas, but be sure to set off nonessen- tial appositives with commas. Essential appositive: The famous British mystery writer Danger, Will Robinson A S atha Christie disappeared in 1924 and was missing Don't set off essential Nonessential appositive: Agatha Christie, the famous British mystery writer, disappeared in 1924 and was missing for 10 days. One of the most common writing errors concerns misuse of commas with appositives and appositive phrases. Writers sometimes set off essential appositives with commas, but neglect those poor nonessential ones. You would never do that, would you? To make sure you're not guilty of that comma abuse, let's take a minute to practice, shall we? Add commas as needed to each of the following sentences. 1. Isadora Duncan a great American dancer of the early twentieth century has become almost as famous for her death as her dancing. 2. John Styth Pemberton an Atlanta pharmacist created the original Coca-Cola in 1886. 3. Richard Nixon is the only American president who was forced to resign his office. 4. King Louis XIV of France a ballet dancer from the time he was a teenager established the Royal Ballet Company. 5. Robert Benchley the American humorist and critic was a member of the Algonquin table of noted wits. 6. Nellie Melba a famous Australian soprano of the late nineteenth and early twen- tieth century gave her name to a snack food called "melba toast." 7. The centaur a mythological creature is said to feast on raw flesh and prodigious amounts of liquor. 8. Alexander the Great died of a fever. 9. Ferrets a domesticated variety of polecats were first tamed in 1500 B.C.E. by the Egyptians. 10. Some people consider the number 13 unlucky. Chapter II: Phrases: Prime-Time Players US Answers 1. Isadora Duncan, a great American dancer of the early twentieth century, has become almost as famous for her death as her dancing. 2. John Styth Pemberton, an Atlanta pharmacist, created the original Coca-Cola in U 3. No punctuation change needed. 4. King Louis XIV of France, a ballet dancer from the time he was a teenager, established the Royal Ballet Company. 5. Robert Benchley, the American humorist and critic, was a member of the Algonquin table of noted wits. 6. Nellie Melba, a famous Australian soprano of the late nineteenth and early twentieth century, gave her name to a snack food called "melba toast." 7. The centaur, a mythological crea- ture, is said to feast on raw flesh and prodigious amounts of liquor. 8. No punctuation change needed. 9. Ferrets, a domesticated variety of polecats, were first tamed in 1500 B.C.E. by the Egyptians. 10. No punctuation change needed. Take My Word for It Appositives, as with other parts of a sentence, can be com- pound. To create a compound appositive, connect the apposi- tives with a correlative conjunc- tion: and, but, or, for, so, nor, and yet. Verbal Phrases: Talk Soup A verbal is a verb form used as another part of speech. Like Gaul, verbals come in three varieties: participles, gerunds, and infinitives. Each type has a different function in a sentence: • Participles function as adjectives. • Gerunds function as nouns. • Infinitives function as nouns, adjectives, or adverbs. You Could Look It Up A verbal is a verb form used as another part of speech. IM> Part 3: Usage and Abusaqe Although a verbal doesn't function as a verb in a sentence, it does retain two qualities of a verb: • A verbal can be described by adverbs and adverbial phrases. • A verbal can add modifiers to become a verbal phrase. Let's get to know the three verbals a little better. Part and Participle A participle is a form of a verb that functions as an adjective. There are two kinds of participles: present participles and past participles. • Present participles end in -ing (jumping, burning, You Could look It Up _, SpeMng) - • Past participles usually end in -ed, -t, or -en (jumped, burnt, spoken). A participle is a form of a verb that functions as an adjective. In the mood to add some participle action to your sentences? Here's how you do it: • The howling children disturbed the neighbors. The present participle "howling" describes the noun "children." • Fred Flintstone gave Barney Rubble a crumbling rock. The present participle "crumbling" describes the noun "rock." • The frozen candy bar broke her $900 bridgework. The past participle "frozen" describes the noun "candy bar." • Annoyed, Rita ate dinner by herself in the bathroom. The past participle "annoyed" describes the noun "Rita." Don't confuse participles and verbs. Participles aren't preceded by a helping verb, as these examples show: • The sputtering car jerked down the road, (participle) • The car was sputtering down the road, (verb) Chapter II: Phrases: Prime-Time Players H7 Participle phrases contain a participle modified by an adverb or an adverbial phrase. The whole kit and caboodle acts as an adjective, as these examples show: • Swimming slowly, I didn't notice the shark on my tail. The participle phrase "swimming slowly" describes the pronoun "I." • Annoyed by its heavy breathing, I told it to get lost. The participle phrase "Annoyed by its heavy breathing" describes the pronoun "I." However, the participle phrase can also be placed after the word it describes. In that case, it is usually set off by commas, as in this example: • "My sister, burning the toast, looked distracted." Like appositives, participles and participle phrases are an indispensable part of the writer's bag of tricks because they allow you to create concise and interesting sen- tences. Use them to combine information from two or more sentences into one sen- tence. Notice how much more punch the following sentence has when it is combined by using a participle: Two sentences: Noel Coward made a slight but pointed adjustment to an old cliché. He once described another writer as every other inch a gentleman. One sentence: Making a slight but pointed adjustment to the old cliché, Noel Coward once described another writer as every other inch a gentleman. Gerund Phrases A gerund is a form of a verb used as a noun. Remember the following two guidelines when you hunt for gerunds: • Gerunds always end in -ing. • Gerunds always act as nouns. Gerunds can function as subjects, direct objects, indirect objects, objects of a preposi- tion, predicate nominatives, and appositives. Here are some examples of gerunds: • Leroy expanded his skills by studying. ^^0^%. The gerund "studying" is the object of fifTj 6 ^° u Could Look It Up . the preposition "by." ^«43? A gerund is Q verb form • At the age of 10, Irving started running. use< ^ QS a noun - The gerund "running" is a direct object. IMI Part 3: Usage and Abusaqe • My mother's sole occupation, kvetching, makes her tedious company. The gerund "kvetching" (an especially virulent form of complaining) is an appositive in this sentence. Like a participle, a gerund can be part of a phrase. In that case, the whole package is called a gerund phrase. (Got you with that one, didn't I?) Here are some gerund phrases busy at work in their sentences: • The quiet, steady rowing soothed him. The gerund phrase is "the quiet, steady rowing." Danger, Will Robinson Don't confuse gerunds and present participles, because both end in -ing. A gerund func- tions only as a noun, while a participle functions only as an modifier. • My evening routine features jogging slowly around the block. The gerund phrase is "jogging slowly around the block." • Thousands of "Dead Heads" show their dedica- tion to their departed leader by following what s left of The Grateful Dead around the country. The gerund phrase is "following what's left of The Grateful Dead around the country." Infinitive Phrases: The Final Frontier Last but not least we have the infinitive, a form of the verb that comes after the word to and acts as a noun, adjective, or adverb. Versatile little babies, infinitives can fill as many roles as gerunds, with the addition of adjectives and adverbs. Here are some examples: • To succeed takes courage, foresight, and luck. The infinitive is "to succeed," and it functions as the subject. • Alone in her cubicle, all she wanted was to survive. The infinitive is "to survive," and it functions as the direct object. • Afraid to move, she froze in terror. You Could Look It Up The infinitive is a verb form that comes after the word to and functions as a noun, adjec- tive, or adverb. The infinitive is "to move," and it modifies the adverb "afraid." Chapter II: Phrases: Prime-Time Players H9 An infinitive can be used as a phrase. An infinitive phrase, as with the other verbal phrases, contains modifiers that together act as a single part of speech. Following are some examples: • His goal, to break into Fort Knox, was never achieved. The infinitive phrase is "to break into Fort Knox" and modifies the noun "goal." • The pilgrim's hope was to reach the shrine before sundown. The infinitive phrase "to reach the shrine before sundown" describes "hope." I 1 Danger, Will Robinson Don't confuse infinitives with prepositional phrases that begin with to. Remember that a prepositional phrase always ends with a noun or a pronoun; an infinitive always ends with a verb. The Least You Need to Know • A phrase is a group of words, without a subject or a verb, that functions as a single part of speech. Phrases cannot stand alone as independent units. • Prepositional phrases begin with a preposition and end with a noun or pronoun; they can function as adjectival phrases and adverbial phrases. • Appositives rename another noun or pronoun; appositive phrases include modi- fiers. • Verbals are verb forms used as another part of speech. Participles function as adjectives, gerunds function as nouns, infinitives function as nouns, adjectives, or adverbs. • This sounds a lot more difficult than it is. . to know the three verbals a little better. Part and Participle A participle is a form of a verb that functions as an adjective. There are two kinds of participles: present participles . as these examples show: • The sputtering car jerked down the road, (participle) • The car was sputtering down the road, (verb) Chapter II: Phrases: Prime-Time Players H7 Participle. show their dedica- tion to their departed leader by following what s left of The Grateful Dead around the country. The gerund phrase is "following what's left of The Grateful