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Buddhist College of Singapore Bachelor of Arts in Buddhist Studies English Foundation (Upper Intermediate Level) Academic Writing Assignment 1 Explain how globalisation has changed your country in the.
Buddhist College of Singapore Bachelor of Arts in Buddhist Studies English Foundation (Upper-Intermediate Level) Academic Writing Assignment Explain how globalisation has changed your country in the last 10 years Choose one of the following aspects of globalisation for this writing task Entertainment Holidays Culture (festivals, language or food) Technology Language Word Limit: 300 to 350 words _ Marking Scheme (Do not write in this column) Content Organisatio n Language Total 20 Marker’s Comments Comprehension of the essay is affected by many language mistakes Please refer to my comments and editing A topic sentence can only have one main idea In the context of globalization, technology always plays an important role in improving labor productivity, production efficiency and makes a great contribution in serving the fields Therefore, technology has had a significant influence, especially in developing countries like Vietnam Currently, technology is applied to serve and makes a lot of changes many fields in Vietnam This essay will discuss the benefits of technology to social fields in the process of globalization in Vietnam Advanced technology has contributed to many areas of development in Vietnam, specifically in the field of education and transfer of technology Firstly, globalization enable Vietnam to import a variety of modern equipment In the field of education, modern equipment is changing the way traditional For example, teachers prepare lessons electronically and use projectors to present their lessons so that the lessons are more engaging Besides that, many electrical appliances are also imported from various countries Examples of imported electrical appliances that are available Vietnam are dishwashers and washing machines In short, globalization has helped Vietnam to import many technological equipment that is useful for many fields and convenient for people's lives Secondly, globalization to promote investors to invest in Vietnam and transfer technology chains of the world into specific industries and fields in Vietnam For instance, in the field of automobile manufacturing technology, “Truong Hai” Automobile Factory is received the transfer line of Hyundai group for automobile production Besides that , many technology corporations also invest in Vietnam Typically, in 2008, Samsung group of Korea started construction of Samsung electronics Vietnam (SEV) mobile phone factory and more than billion smart products are produced in Vietnam such as smartphones, tablets and basic phone products In short, globalization has strongly attracted investors and transferred the world's modern technologies to Vietnam more and more In conclusion, through the essay we can see that technology is used in almost all fields Globalization has made many industries appear, many new technology fields and many technology products made from Vietnam were born Globalization will continue to give many conditions for Vietnam to catch up with the world's technology in the future In conclusion, Vietnam’s technology is much more advanced in the last 10 years because of globalisation More modern products are produced in Vietnam and there is also technological transfer Globalisation will continue help Vietnam improve its technology in the future ... influence, especially in developing countries like Vietnam Currently, technology is applied to serve and makes a lot of changes many fields in Vietnam This essay will discuss the benefits of technology... enable Vietnam to import a variety of modern equipment In the field of education, modern equipment is changing the way traditional For example, teachers prepare lessons electronically and use... use projectors to present their lessons so that the lessons are more engaging Besides that, many electrical appliances are also imported from various countries Examples of imported electrical