... that are thoughtfully chosen (thoughtfulness of examples is demonstrated by the carefully chosen descriptive details: “nurturing parents,” “there for their children,” “jaw dropping $8 million to ... with sufficient specific supporting details Response builds a position through the use of details, examples and explanations The organization is logical (introduction, each of the four paragraphs ... to indicate relationships among ideas: “however,” “others not,” “also,” “are just two of many,” for this reason”) and demonstrates a thoughtful progression of ideas to a thoughtful conclusion...