... subordinate conjunctions 59Combining Sentences with Pronouns 61Don’t Keep Your Audience Hanging: Removing Danglers 62Dangling participles 62Dangling infinitives 6402_618370-ftoc.indd viii02_618370-ftoc.indd ... said, I think you’re a sniffling, smelly, pimple-tongued, frizzy-haired monster.”Notice the commas in Jill’s answer. Four descriptions are listed: sniffling, smelly, pimple-tongued, and frizzy-haired. ... Use this rule as a guide: If the items in a description aren’t of equal importance, don’t separate them with commas.Distinguishing essential information from extrasSometimes your descriptions...